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240:岡本2003/03/22(土) 16:38
雪月華様への支援になればと思ったのですが。単語やフレーズがごっそり
頭から抜け落ちていました。大恥ですな。受験期だったら...。
タイトルは”The myth of the blue arch”
直訳で”蒼穹の神話”、意訳で”蒼天の譜”ですか。
The Myth of the Blue Arch
Light of the golden sun becomes obscure.
Dazzle of the blue sky becomes clear.
Dark clouds come from the west and cover the whole sky.
All stars gather in the sky and counter the dark clouds.
Dark clouds get a thunder and the stars are driven away to the ground.
Three novas defeat the thunder and the clouds are driven away to the west.
All stars lose their aims and the stars are scattered into the sky.
The thunder blows out the dark clouds and runs to the east.
Two stars change to the suns and stay at the north and the middle.
One star changes to the moon and goes to the south but disappears by its impatience.
Three stars change to the heart gem and two wings and become the dragon and stay at the east.
The northern sun increases its size gradually.
The middle sun moves its feet busily.
Two moons are given new lives and stay at the south with a bright star
The dragon is driven away by the thunder and stay in the middle with the sun
The thunder loses its destiny owing to the sun.
The dragon finds its opportunity behind the sun.
The northern sun tries to take in the middle sun and the dragon roars at the east at the same time.
The one of the southern moons fades away and the other changes into the crescent with the help of the bright star
The middle sun goes to the east suddenly and tries to take in the dragon.
The dragon drops its right wing and runs away to the northern sun.
The northern sun grapples with the middle sun.
The intense battle continues with emitting glints.
The dragon gets its fangs and goes to the south.
The right wing blows out two northern stars and follows the dragon.
The northern sun loses its shining core owing to its haughty.
The middle sun gains the sun running back to the north.
Since the sun combines with the northern sun, he goes to the south with mighty powers.
Since the dragon has no fortune besides the clouds, it runs to the southeast with many stars.
The crescent cooperates with the dragon and sends away the sun to the north with the help of the wind from the southeast.
The bright star runs after the sun but fades away on its way to the west without the help of the sky.
The dragon goes to the west and gains control over the area immediately with the help of the stars.
Then the sky is divided in three by the sun, the crescent, and the dragon
The dragon tries to go to the north, but the crescent plucks off the right wing of the dragon and changes into a half moon.
The angry dragon attacks the half moon but loses the left wing out of its anger.
The dragon which loses both wings still goes to the east but an unexpected shooting star breaks the heart gem of the dragon.
The dragon still lives long and hangs down its tail to the south.
The sun decreases his brightness and a macula appears on the sun. The macula becomes large as it goes.
The dragon loses its fangs and the clouds fight with the macula. The clouds get exhausted and vanish on their way.
The sun covers the dragon completely and invites the dragon to an eternal sleep.
A flame covers the sun suddenly and leads the sun to a renewed life.
The new sun absorbs the half moon from the east and the west and only the sun is left in the sky.
The sun sets to the south and night falls from the north.
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・時制は前後を明確にするのが難しいため、現在形で統一。
・素人の私には叙事詩や自由詩は難しいため、無理に対句形式にしたところ
があります。そんなに内容は変えていませんが。
・雲は菫卓や諸葛亮を示すもので単数にするべきか迷いましたが、
語呂と集合名詞で使うことが多いことからcloudsで。
牙＝趙雲も一本牙はおかしいとfangsに。
・sun, moonはそれぞれ男性、女性として扱うので動詞の格はそれにあわせました。
後は、現役大学生の方々、よろしくお願いします。
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